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alice
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PostSubject: i don't have a title for it yet but....   Mon Mar 29, 2010 4:02 am

Hey guys i started working on this story bout 2 or 3 days ago and i thought i would post it on here. ps if at first it sounds like a vampire story its not.

This is so, I don't know, odd for me. I'm not a day person, I'm a night person I don't even get why I'm out in the daylight. I'm surprised no one's even looked at me. Yet.
I'm Star and I have, like, no friends at all. That shows how much of a life I have right. I have no friends, no life, and I'm trying to get one.
This is my story of trying to get a life. Enjoy.
 
Who knows why but I was lonely and needed someone to hang out with. I also noticed that since I had no friends I also had no life.
I decided that today I was going to the park and make some friends. I hope my plan will work like I want it to.
As I walked to the park I saw many people around my age. Ever since I had graduated high school I never went outside during the day, I always slept during the day and watched the stars at night. Graduating two years ago nothing had really changed from when I last saw it.
"Star? Is it really you?" a male voice said behind me. I had no clue who it was either.
"Um, hi." I say turning around to see Damon, an old high school friend.
"Star, do you know how long it's been since I've seen you?"he asked.
"Uh two years?"
"More like three years!"
"I thought it was two. Wanna know why you haven't see me in a long time?"
"Yeah. I love good stories."
I told him what I had been up to those last couple years and he told me he was a book publisher.
"Star you should give me a story to give my boss! You could become a famous author cause your writings are really good!"Damon exclaimed.
"No Damen, I'm not giving you one."
"Fine be that way. Anyway wanna go out for lunch or do somethin'?"Damon asked me.
"Yeah, you know you were my one and only friend. Even though you were one of the popular kids no one made fun of you for hanging out with me."I told him.
"Yeah, but they didn't care that I hung out with you cause they thought you were really cool."
"Me? Cool?"
"Yeah. I know right."
"Let's go eat. I'm hungry."
"Follow me."
He led me to a really expensive car. I had no clue what kind of car it was. When the car started moving my favorite band, Hawk Nelson, was playing.
"Damon when did you start listening to Hawk Nelson?"
"Ever since you stopped talking to me. It reminded me of you. I didn't want to forget you Star."
"Oh, well, that's nice."


more soon!
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PostSubject: Re: i don't have a title for it yet but....   Mon Mar 29, 2010 4:06 am

Good start! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: i don't have a title for it yet but....   Mon Mar 29, 2010 6:36 am

Wow that's a good start for a story!
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PostSubject: Re: i don't have a title for it yet but....   Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:24 am

thanx guys!
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PostSubject: Re: i don't have a title for it yet but....   Tue Mar 30, 2010 8:34 am

I love that story! Keep writing!

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PostSubject: Re: i don't have a title for it yet but....   Mon Apr 05, 2010 1:28 pm

That story is really good, you should write more, don't leave us all hanging. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: i don't have a title for it yet but....   Sun Apr 11, 2010 10:44 pm

That's a great story Smile
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PostSubject: Re: i don't have a title for it yet but....   Fri Apr 16, 2010 5:27 am

OMG you like have to continue that story. I love it!!
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PostSubject: Re: i don't have a title for it yet but....   Wed Apr 21, 2010 12:44 am

Its Awesome!
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PostSubject: Re: i don't have a title for it yet but....   Sun Aug 15, 2010 11:25 am

Omg! Love this story! I wanna buy it! XD
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