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PostSubject: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeFri Sep 04, 2009 4:02 am

I made this poem when my sister was away in Quebec ( I live in Canada and it's a province )

When the sky is blue,
I'm thinking 'bout you.

When the sky is pinky pink,
I'm giving you this speacial winky wink ; )

And our memoiries oh how sweet!
The laughter, the giggles, the warmth lit by heat.

Well I guess this is the end,
So I'm clicking the button Send!

Is it good? I think it's not that bad for a young kid like me! cat
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 07, 2009 1:26 am

It's awesome! I especially love the 3rd stanza. Great work (:
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 07, 2009 1:38 am

Pawsome Poem! My poem I wrote Icon_biggrin


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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeWed Sep 09, 2009 10:16 am

Thanks everyone! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeMon Jan 18, 2010 9:39 am

Cool poem! Your sis will love it!
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeMon Jan 18, 2010 6:31 pm

awww that's a pawsome poem! My poem I wrote 55213
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeMon Jan 18, 2010 11:15 pm

Yes its really good.Your sis will love it Very Happy.If i was your sister i no i would.
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 21, 2010 5:44 am

Aww! I love it:)
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 28, 2010 9:10 pm

aww it's cute!! i like it =)
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeTue Feb 16, 2010 7:53 pm

Amazing your talented
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeTue Feb 16, 2010 9:09 pm

That was a very good poem! Very Happy I liked it!
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeWed Feb 17, 2010 5:26 am

I love it♥️
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeMon Apr 05, 2010 1:30 pm

That was really cute. I liked the part about the memories, right before the last lines. :]
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeMon Apr 05, 2010 11:49 pm

Very cool.. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeTue Apr 06, 2010 5:54 am

that's so beautiful i love it Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeFri Apr 16, 2010 5:24 am

That is an awesome poem. I love it My poem I wrote Icon_cheers
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeSat Apr 17, 2010 4:36 am

That is such a good poem Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeTue Apr 20, 2010 3:00 am

It's super good I wish I was a good poet like you but i'm good at writing stories!
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeTue Apr 20, 2010 4:31 am

I am so shocked a younger could make that.Its like the best poem ever.
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeWed Apr 21, 2010 12:44 am

Pawsome! Its nice Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeSat Apr 24, 2010 3:49 am

Love it your Poems come from the heart I bet you could make a poem book full of ones like that its so sweet . cries because it so sweet .
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PostSubject: Re: My poem I wrote   My poem I wrote I_icon_minitimeMon May 17, 2010 9:54 am

Very cool!!!!
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