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Twinkle0 Furry Cub
Posts : 11 Join date : 2009-09-04
| Subject: My poem I wrote Fri Sep 04, 2009 4:02 am | |
| I made this poem when my sister was away in Quebec ( I live in Canada and it's a province ) When the sky is blue, I'm thinking 'bout you. When the sky is pinky pink, I'm giving you this speacial winky wink ; ) And our memoiries oh how sweet! The laughter, the giggles, the warmth lit by heat. Well I guess this is the end, So I'm clicking the button Send! Is it good? I think it's not that bad for a young kid like me! | |
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EviePaw Furry Cub
Posts : 10 Join date : 2009-09-06
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Mon Sep 07, 2009 1:26 am | |
| It's awesome! I especially love the 3rd stanza. Great work (: | |
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Admin Owner/Founder
Posts : 1970 Join date : 2009-06-26
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Mon Sep 07, 2009 1:38 am | |
| Pawsome Poem!
Last edited by Admin on Wed Nov 25, 2009 2:10 am; edited 2 times in total | |
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Twinkle0 Furry Cub
Posts : 11 Join date : 2009-09-04
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Wed Sep 09, 2009 10:16 am | |
| Thanks everyone! | |
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KileyPieRox Furry Cub
Posts : 386 Join date : 2009-06-28
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Mon Jan 18, 2010 9:39 am | |
| Cool poem! Your sis will love it! | |
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daniela4leafclover108 Furry Cub
Posts : 119 Join date : 2009-12-28
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Mon Jan 18, 2010 6:31 pm | |
| awww that's a pawsome poem! | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Mon Jan 18, 2010 11:15 pm | |
| Yes its really good.Your sis will love it .If i was your sister i no i would. |
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RosieSoStylin Furry Cub
Posts : 118 Join date : 2009-12-12
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Thu Jan 21, 2010 5:44 am | |
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krissy Furry Cub
Posts : 119 Join date : 2009-11-06
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Thu Jan 28, 2010 9:10 pm | |
| aww it's cute!! i like it =) | |
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camilla Furry Cub
Posts : 152 Join date : 2009-09-21
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:53 pm | |
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CarlyAllHeart Furry Cub
Posts : 139 Join date : 2010-01-31
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:09 pm | |
| That was a very good poem! I liked it! | |
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camilla Furry Cub
Posts : 152 Join date : 2009-09-21
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Wed Feb 17, 2010 5:26 am | |
| I love it | |
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Starr Furry Cub
Posts : 167 Join date : 2010-04-05
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Mon Apr 05, 2010 1:30 pm | |
| That was really cute. I liked the part about the memories, right before the last lines. :] | |
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lovezippy18 Furry Cub
Posts : 292 Join date : 2010-01-22
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:49 pm | |
| Very cool.. | |
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claire Furry Cub
Posts : 542 Join date : 2010-02-05
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Tue Apr 06, 2010 5:54 am | |
| that's so beautiful i love it | |
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emiliebear46 Furry Cub
Posts : 523 Join date : 2010-02-28
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Fri Apr 16, 2010 5:24 am | |
| That is an awesome poem. I love it | |
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Remi11 Furry Cub
Posts : 74 Join date : 2010-04-09
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Sat Apr 17, 2010 4:36 am | |
| That is such a good poem | |
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Rubybearsrock16 Furry Cub
Posts : 1552 Join date : 2010-04-08
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Tue Apr 20, 2010 3:00 am | |
| It's super good I wish I was a good poet like you but i'm good at writing stories! | |
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EleanorLoveable22 Furry Cub
Posts : 34 Join date : 2010-04-19
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Tue Apr 20, 2010 4:31 am | |
| I am so shocked a younger could make that.Its like the best poem ever. | |
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TestAwesome Graphic Designer
Posts : 371 Join date : 2009-11-30
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Wed Apr 21, 2010 12:44 am | |
| Pawsome! Its nice | |
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Rubybearsrock16 Furry Cub
Posts : 1552 Join date : 2010-04-08
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Sat Apr 24, 2010 3:49 am | |
| Love it your Poems come from the heart I bet you could make a poem book full of ones like that its so sweet . cries because it so sweet . | |
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Jelly Furry Cub
Posts : 634 Join date : 2009-11-10
| Subject: Re: My poem I wrote Mon May 17, 2010 9:54 am | |
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