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PostSubject: Sages poem   Mon Jun 07, 2010 1:49 am

This is a poem i wrote and the poem is true.

My grandma was so weak
she couldn't even speak

she's laying In bed
with an aching head

we're about to cry
as I'm saying good-bye

the next day
to the hospital,on our way

we got there that day
they told us she passed away

a tear down my face, they see
my grandma has now left me
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PostSubject: Re: Sages poem   Mon Jun 07, 2010 1:54 am

Awww...so this was the poem you were talking about on the chatbox? Nicee poem. Its soo sad though. Sorry this happened to you..:[
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PostSubject: Re: Sages poem   Mon Jun 07, 2010 1:57 am

Thats a really nice poem, Sage. Sorry about your grandma. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Sages poem   Mon Jun 07, 2010 2:09 am

yes it was kiley. thanks. it's ok, she's always with me now. Smile


thanks nicki. it's ok, as i said up there ^ she's always with me now Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Sages poem   Mon Jun 07, 2010 3:24 am

Awesome Poem Bff!
Keep up the good work!
sorry about your grandma too
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PostSubject: Re: Sages poem   Mon Jun 07, 2010 3:38 am

thanks!
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it's ok
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PostSubject: Re: Sages poem   Mon Jun 07, 2010 5:12 am

Awwwwww that's so sad Sad it was a great poem to express your feeling Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Sages poem   Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:06 am

thanks, it was. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Sages poem   Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:25 am

Awww, Sage I am sorry about the loss, but great poem.

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PostSubject: Re: Sages poem   Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:40 am

it's okay admin, and thanks Smile . i bet my grandma would be proud of my poetry. now and a days i'm writing poetry Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Sages poem   Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:25 am

Aw i'm sorry about your lost :[
your poem is very good though. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Sages poem   Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:01 am

It's ok Sad
She's in a better place... Smile
Thank you! Smile
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