MaxBrown22
Furry Cub
Posts : 438
Join date : 2010-01-25
 |  Subject: Ode to Basketball  Tue Jun 08, 2010 6:24 am | |
| We had to write an ode for school and I thought I would show you guy what I made 
Ode to Basketball
I was walking to the port,
when I saw a small court,
waiting for some kids to play ball.
Finally, some come in the icy wind of fall.
As I see the fired up children gather up,
they start their warm up.
As the team starts shooting hoops,
they gather in their groups.
The crowd cheers to give some support,
never minding the news report.
Oh no! The ref got a phone call!!
Everything is situated and now its jump ball.
The guard goes to the hoop for an easy lay up.
They go on a run and the points add up.
The ball bouncing about in those silly little loops.
Once again, the team gets the win with the crowds loud woops
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claire
Furry Cub
Posts : 542
Join date : 2010-02-05
| | Subject: Re: Ode to Basketball Tue Jun 08, 2010 6:38 am | |
| Awesome!!! i really liked it  | |
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Rubybearsrock16
Furry Cub
Posts : 1552
Join date : 2010-04-08
| | Subject: Re: Ode to Basketball Tue Jun 08, 2010 11:53 pm | |
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Sage
Furry Cub
Posts : 184
Join date : 2010-05-25
| | Subject: Re: Ode to Basketball Wed Jun 09, 2010 5:33 am | |
| it's really good max | |
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Hannah
Furry Cub
Posts : 237
Join date : 2010-06-01
| | Subject: Re: Ode to Basketball Thu Jun 10, 2010 8:48 am | |
| This is really good! Great Job! | |
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CarlyAllHeart
Furry Cub
Posts : 139
Join date : 2010-01-31
| | Subject: Re: Ode to Basketball Thu Jun 10, 2010 8:49 am | |
| awesome Max! I like it! | |
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