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AmieeFunlovin
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PostSubject: My story about Layla tom and mum   Thu Nov 12, 2009 12:36 am

Mum:Its your first day at school you dont want to miss it
Layla:I am not botherd if i miss it
Tom:Layla this is my first day of nursary
Layla:Cool i am in year 4 and you only my little brother so i dont want to know about you.
Mum:Layla be nice or you will be banned of playing on the computer.
Layla:Yeah yeah
Mum:Layla thats it your grounded.
Tom:Mummy i am exited to go to nusary
Mum:Aww well you will soon be there
Layla:Ugh mum you know tom is annoying he thinks hes older than me
Mum:Layla just be happy for tom hes you little brother.
Tom:And Layla is my big sister
Mum:Thats right tom.
Mum:We need to leave Layla tom get into the car
Layla:Mum drop me of first.
Mum: i will layla and i cant wait with you anymore now that Tom is in nursary.
Layla:Mum i have actually never ever wanted you to stay with me.
Tom:Mummy i want you to stay with me.
Mum:Tom alright i will
"Layla gets out of car and goes to school"
Tom: Bye bye layla
Layla:Bye best brother
Mum:Aww layla so sweet bye layla i love you and any way have a good time.
Tom:MUMMY WERE HERE Very Happy
Mum:I know
"Tom gets out of car and so does mum"
mum:Bye tom love you and i hope you have a good time.
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PostSubject: Re: My story about Layla tom and mum   Thu Nov 12, 2009 2:32 am

Hope you like my story up to now part 2 will be coming soon
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PostSubject: Re: My story about Layla tom and mum   Fri Nov 13, 2009 12:14 am

Here is part two

Tom:Hello my name is Tom
Harry:Hello tom do you have a sister
Tom:Yes i do Layla
Harry:Ok i dont have a big sister
Tom: ok
Harry:its home time
(tom looks for mum and Layla)
Tom:Mummy were is Layla
mum:Aww honey she is not here she is walking home on her own
Tom:BUT I WANT LAYLA
(Layla comes to see tom)
Tom:LAYLA
Layla:TOM
mum:Guys lets go home
(mum opens door)
(Layla and tom run in)
(Tom falls over)
Layla:Tom are you ok
layla:MUM QUICK
Mum::O TOM

-EDIT @ Admin i removed "TOMMORZ" as it is using LOL speak text which is not perrmitted.
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PostSubject: Re: My story about Layla tom and mum   Fri Nov 13, 2009 10:54 pm

Cool i like your story
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PostSubject: Re: My story about Layla tom and mum   Tue Nov 17, 2009 12:15 am

Love your story.
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PostSubject: Re: My story about Layla tom and mum   Sun Nov 29, 2009 6:30 am

cool story
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PostSubject: Re: My story about Layla tom and mum   Sun Nov 29, 2009 11:45 pm

Cool story.
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PostSubject: Re: My story about Layla tom and mum   Mon Jan 18, 2010 9:38 am

cool story I like the way it is written
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PostSubject: Re: My story about Layla tom and mum   Thu Jan 21, 2010 5:45 am

Nice story:)
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PostSubject: Re: My story about Layla tom and mum   Thu Jan 21, 2010 5:46 am

Nice story i like the way it was written to lol.
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PostSubject: Re: My story about Layla tom and mum   Thu Jan 28, 2010 9:12 pm

i like it, nice story Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My story about Layla tom and mum   Mon Apr 05, 2010 1:27 pm

You're story is pretty good! You only have too chapters though, you should write some more. :]
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