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Sage
Furry Cub
Posts : 184
Join date : 2010-05-25
 |  Subject: Sages poem  Mon Jun 07, 2010 1:49 am | |
| This is a poem i wrote and the poem is true.
My grandma was so weak
she couldn't even speak
she's laying In bed
with an aching head
we're about to cry
as I'm saying good-bye
the next day
to the hospital,on our way
we got there that day
they told us she passed away
a tear down my face, they see
my grandma has now left me | |
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KileyPieRox
Furry Cub
Posts : 386
Join date : 2009-06-28
| | Subject: Re: Sages poem Mon Jun 07, 2010 1:54 am | |
| Awww...so this was the poem you were talking about on the chatbox? Nicee poem. Its soo sad though. Sorry this happened to you..:[ | |
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NickiSnowflake
Furry Cub
Posts : 70
Join date : 2010-05-02
| | Subject: Re: Sages poem Mon Jun 07, 2010 1:57 am | |
| Thats a really nice poem, Sage. Sorry about your grandma.  | |
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Sage
Furry Cub
Posts : 184
Join date : 2010-05-25
| | Subject: Re: Sages poem Mon Jun 07, 2010 2:09 am | |
| yes it was kiley. thanks. it's ok, she's always with me now. thanks nicki. it's ok, as i said up there ^ she's always with me now | |
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Hannah
Furry Cub
Posts : 237
Join date : 2010-06-01
| | Subject: Re: Sages poem Mon Jun 07, 2010 3:24 am | |
| Awesome Poem Bff!
Keep up the good work!
sorry about your grandma too | |
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Sage
Furry Cub
Posts : 184
Join date : 2010-05-25
| | Subject: Re: Sages poem Mon Jun 07, 2010 3:38 am | |
| thanks! it's ok | |
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claire
Furry Cub
Posts : 542
Join date : 2010-02-05
| | Subject: Re: Sages poem Mon Jun 07, 2010 5:12 am | |
| Awwwwww that's so sad  it was a great poem to express your feeling | |
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Sage
Furry Cub
Posts : 184
Join date : 2010-05-25
| | Subject: Re: Sages poem Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:06 am | |
| thanks, it was. | |
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Admin
Owner/Founder
Posts : 1970
Join date : 2009-06-26
| | Subject: Re: Sages poem Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:25 am | |
| Awww, Sage I am sorry about the loss, but great poem. | |
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Sage
Furry Cub
Posts : 184
Join date : 2010-05-25
| | Subject: Re: Sages poem Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:40 am | |
| it's okay admin, and thanks . i bet my grandma would be proud of my poetry. now and a days i'm writing poetry  | |
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ToriAllHeart266
Furry Cub
Posts : 36
Join date : 2010-06-22
| | Subject: Re: Sages poem Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:25 am | |
| Aw i'm sorry about your lost :[ your poem is very good though. good job | |
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Sage
Furry Cub
Posts : 184
Join date : 2010-05-25
| | Subject: Re: Sages poem Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:01 am | |
| It's ok She's in a better place... Thank you! | |
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