The Key to my Heart- Book

Chapter 1
Going Grey

Hi i'm Alice Combat I have Freckles, Brown Eyes and Nice Wavy Red Hair, I live with my Brother Sammy Mum Gina and Dad Gordon I live in Bigminton a Magical Town, I was walking home from School when Felicity appeared "What are you up to Twirp?" she asked me, (Felicity is the meanest girl ever) "Nothing..." I replied "Ugh! I know that... Why is your Face Grey?" she asked in a strange way "Grey? My Face isn't Grey!" I shouted thinking she was bullying me, "Well look in a mirror, Twirp." she replied "Ok, I will and i'll prove you WRONG!" and I ran off to Josie's "Josie am I grey?" I asked Josie my BFF "Well... Erm... Yes" she replied, "Can I borrow your Mirror?" I asked "Sure..." Josie Replied "Come In" I said a nice kind "Thanks" to Josie. I looked in the Mirror "Oh No! I am turning grey!" "This is terrible, The school dance is coming up soon!" Josie told me "It'll be okay, remember we live in Bigminton the Magical Town we'll just go to Bigminton Wizard, and ask him to turn you the right colour"...

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